2009-07-09

Haiku 3

holiday fliers
caught on the tarmac but for
mechanic inside

2 comments:

Greg said...

I wonder if you could start a google code project to Haiku-ify the news items in my reader...

Arthur said...

I look back at this one and consider the double entendre in "holiday fliers". It might have been newsprint adverts for Boxing Day deals. Unfortunate, but it made the haiku more amusing.

I'm considering adding links to the news item I'm referring to, but there's a certain twitter-ish minimalism to the form by itself that would be lost.

What do you think?